What is the BEST revision of this sentence?




Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places and now people realize wetlands are homes for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are important for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

People used to think wetlands were horrible places. But today, people realize wetlands are homes for birds and an important part of the environment.

People used to think wetlands were horrible places and now people realize wetlands are homes for animals like birds and wetlands are important for the environment.

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

We can see that the best revision is: Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

Revision of a sentence or passage actually refers to the improvement of that sentence that is done in order to create another version of the sentence but yet still the same message.

The best revision here is:

Wetlands used to be thought of as horrible places. Now people realize wetlands are homes for birds. Wetlands are important for the environment.

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"tis he whose law is reason"

its a :

dialect

methaphor

personification

simile

If the water has water underwater,Is the water that is underwater drowning?

The phase after waxing gibbous is _____. first quarter moon full moon crescent moon new moon?

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A dependable source of information is a ____________.

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In lines 32-43, the narrator uses which of the following literary devices to describe
Bombay?
O Alliteration
O Allusion
O Personification
O Simile

Which questions best demonstrate how to objectively evaluate an essay for interesting and unique presentation?
Select two options.
Do I agree with the ideas presented?
Do I think the writing is interesting?
Do I like the essay?
Do I see that the writer tried to add style to the essay?
Do I notice that the writer tries to engage readers?

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According to the article, what is one reason why the A350
could save money for airlines?
A. It burns less fuel than other jets of similar size.
B. It costs less to manufacture.
C. It can carry up to 369 passengers.
D. It is more comfortable for passengers.

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Their Trojan horse of a gift contained a hidden camera for spying on the young couple

Fact

Direct reference

Retelling a story

Allusion

Illusion

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Which propaganda technique is being used in the following statement? "The cure-all competitor is not qualified to be pain medication because it lacks the needed
ingredients.
A. None; this statement is not propaganda.
B. Card stacking
C. Circular reasoning
D. Generality

Questions:
1. "There is just one large lot left to build on, and the theater would use up all of that
space." In this sentence, the word lot means:
A. a great amount
B. a complete group
C. a section of land.
D. a result of chance.
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which of the following describes the impact of the cold war in America?
A. the relationship between the American people and the government was strong.
B. people feared communism and those who supported it.
C. the united states was often divided over the ideas of communism.
D. it was decided that nuclear weapons should not be used for war.

Which excerpt from Theseus best shows that Theseus has the characteristics of a Greek hero?

: Find a poem that interests YOU, read the poem (several times preferably, gain an understanding of it for You), and work to break down the tone, mood, and imagery that is presented in the poem.

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Review the module writing prompt.
How have these two authors expressed their relationships with nature? After reading and analyzing "Calypso Borealis," an essay by John Muir, and William Wordsworth's poem "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," write an essay in which you describe how each author views nature and answer the question. Support your discussion with evidence from the text.
Using what you learned in the lesson, write your thesis statement in response to the writing prompt.


I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud-

[1] I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
[5] Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
[10] Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
[15] A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
[20] In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

Calypso Borealis-

[1] After earning a few dollars working on my brother-in law's farm near Portage [Wisconsin], I set off on the first of my long lonely excursions, botanising in glorious freedom around the Great Lakes and wandering through innumerable tamarac and arbor-vitae swamps, and forests of maple, basswood, ash, elm, balsam, fir, pine, spruce, hemlock, rejoicing in their bound wealth and strength and beauty, climbing the trees, revelling in their flowers and fruit like bees in beds of goldenrods, glorying in the fresh cool beauty and charm of the bog and meadow heathworts, grasses, carices, ferns, mosses, liverworts displayed in boundless profusion.
[2] The rarest and most beautiful of the flowering plants I discovered on this first grand excursion was Calypso borealis (the Hider of the North). I had been fording streams more and more difficult to cross and wading bogs and swamps that seemed more and more extensive and more difficult to force one's way through. Entering one of these great tamarac and arbor-vitae swamps one morning, holding a general though very crooked course by compass, struggling through tangled drooping branches and over and under broad heaps of fallen trees, I began to fear that I would not be able to reach dry ground before dark, and therefore would have to pass the night in the swamp and began, faint and hungry, to plan a nest of branches on one of the largest trees or windfalls like a monkey's nest, or eagle's, or Indian's in the flooded forests of the Orinoco described by Humboldt.
[3] But when the sun was getting low and everything seemed most bewildering and discouraging, I found beautiful Calypso on the mossy bank of a stream, growing not in the ground but on a bed of yellow mosses in which its small white bulb had found a soft nest and from which its one leaf and one flower sprung. The flower was white and made the impression of the utmost simple purity like a snowflower. No other bloom was near it, for the bog a short distance below the surface was still frozen, and the water was ice cold. It seemed the most spiritual of all the flower people I had ever met. I sat down beside it and fairly cried for joy…
[6] Oftentimes I had to sleep without blankets, and sometimes without supper, but usually I had no great difficulty in finding a loaf of bread here and there at the houses of the farmer settlers in the widely scattered clearings. With one of these large backwoods loaves I was able to wander many a long wild fertile mile in the forests and bogs, free as the winds, gathering plants, and glorying in God's abounding inexhaustible spiritual beauty bread. Storms, thunderclouds, winds in the woods—were welcomed as friends.

The main purpose of the sixth paragraph (line 53-59) is to



A. give details about Williams' book


B. explain the shock of finding the pieces


C. detail the value of the spilled LEGO pieces


D. interview a local townsperson

HEEEEEEEELPPPP YOU WILL EARN 15 PTS. If you plan to write a report about the history of a sport you enjoy, what order would you use to organize your report?

A. comparing and contrasting

B. in the order you learned about the events

C. chronological (time) order

D. first the most interesting event, then the next most interesting, etc. ,

D
What is the structure of this story?

Which sentence states a fact?


A. Wicked starred Kristin Chenoweth and Idina Menzel when it opened on Broadway on October 30, 2003.


B.Based on a novel by Gregory Maguire, the musical Wicked is the most entertaining show you will find, on or off Broadway.

How can we take care of the Earth?

so during fasting, you cannot eat all day. What is the purpose, and what happens if you break it? (Short answers, nothing long, and this is not a required school assignment.)

Why wasnt jojo siwa invited to the kids choice awards.